Emma1514@HNP
Wednesday, 7 September 2016
Wednesday, 15 June 2016
I have a photograph
I have a photograph. It was taken on a Apple I-phone in 2015 . A photo of us. I am little, about 10 There we are, standing outside of my family's forest just arrived from Hawks Bay We had travelled up by Car, sitting on our own spots in the Car with the sunroof open to watch the birds fly by. In front of us is a house my uncle and aunt On either side is a forest, behind us is garden
Wednesday, 6 April 2016
Sentence Types
Sentence Types
30 March
Opener Sentence
As we walked past the windmill tall, white, strong
AAAWWUBBIS
As the walk was coming to the end, my legs were very sore.
When I got up I was very cold .
After the big walk we got to go for a river swim .
When it was bed time it was not easy to get to bed .
When the third night came there were clothes everywhere.
Maddie talks ,Paige sleeps and Emma is listening to Maddie.
Serial pattern
The confidence course was , fast , fun and creepy but I was happy
It was over.
The climbing wall was hard, fun, small and slippery.
The river was fast, fun and very very cold for me
Interrupter Sentence
The weta’s clinged on to the rocks , damp and cold, in the pitch black cave.
The rock climbing wall , smelly and slippery I can't hang on.
Down in the river wet and cold sand flies surrounding me.
Friday, 18 September 2015
Tuesday, 15 September 2015
Friday, 4 September 2015
Monday, 17 August 2015
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